Posts Tagged ‘endings’
commentary: Campbell & Park (Brighton, 11-28-07)
Moment-by-moment commentary of a group (in this case duo) improvisation as promised. BTW, yours do not have to be as wordy as this one, and you are very welcome to take a short snippet of your performances (30 seconds, 5 seconds, whatever) if you are short on time…
0:06 start
Here’s pretty much the kind of opening I did at the last class. I know Murray’s not quite ready yet (nor, I’m gambling, is the audience), and I jump in, make a bold statement, hoping to shape the rest of the performance in those stark tones
The sweeping, fluttering gesture’s fairly comfortable to play (a choice partly dictated by the fact that we’re performing cold without a warmup), and I also know there’s a few other places I can go with this—I’m familiar with the technique. I’m hedging my bets with the harmonics at the 11 second mark, saying that I may go there, or set up an alternation. I abandon this for the moment, save it maybe for later, because the ultimate tactic I decide to pursue does require the harmonics…
teaching diary 22/10/08: how to begin
as a contrast (?) to Oxley-Taylor
…we do very self-aware improvisations. (…or is it really as big a contrast as I make it sound?)
play
Fine as far as it went, but I miss some of the density and complexity of last week.
discussion
Any comments? criticisms? (A question that I did not ask in class: if we’re afraid, or unwilling, to say we’re dissatisfied with an improvisation, how do we move on from here?)
Andrea feels being “relaxed” has helped un-stuck the group. Kevin would like to be more alert.
my crit
The good: interesting challenges and choices because of the stark volume discrepancies.
The bad: the start, for my tastes, was a little too timid for me.
how do you start an improvisation?
Play and talk through the process. In the discussion, try and articulate what we’re doing, and why we’re doing it both in terms of effect desired (where we’re pushing it), and how we’re affected (how are choices are shaped by others’ actions).
You want it to go somewhere, but of course it does not… and that’s okay.
A step-by-step articulation of choices, consequences of actions, etc.
some observations
Kevin: two ways of opening: something known, or free of premeditation. Kevin is thinking in terms of individual state. (…but how does this map on to a group?)
Andrea: two ways: slow, gentle; fast, dense. Thinking, broadly, in terms of aggregate group behavior. (…but how is this useful if a group is composed of, say, competing agencies?)
how do you start an improvisation? redux
Play and discuss. Okay, for me, this improvisation rocked—interesting contrasts, moments of density, sparseness, etc.
expectations
If you’re surprised by the result, you must have expected something. What are our (imperfectly) predicted consequences of our actions?
sports commentary
Play, while trying to do a DVD commentary. I admit this is hard (talk and play), but Andrea gets this pretty much straight away.
BTW, great little ending to this…
other notes
Paul realizes that it’s okay to ‘play notes’—we don’t have to do ‘extended techniques’.
homework
Write up a moment-by-moment sports commentary to one of our past performances (either in class or with another group, but ideally with a recording that’s available online…). I’ll also do one, and post it up here…
potential questions to tackle
- how do you end an improvisation?
- what might ‘control’ mean in this practice? (Andrea was hovering ’round this word.)
other business
performance-practical
Everyone present is good for anytime during the practical week (8–12 December) as long as it avoids the jazz/pop practicals (checked with Paul O’Donnell subsequently, and the jazz/pop practicals will be on Wednesday).
Kevin will do the program notes; Andrea, the poster.
Need to think about how to bill ourselves, performance format, and, eventually, examination criteria.
open day performance
Everyone present is up for doing a performance at the open day on Saturday, 8th November.